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A grief-stricken moonset--
burning clouds for the sake of silver linings--
captures
the secrets of fireflies.

Under the bed,
hindsight
keeps a close watch
through the dark.
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WriterInACave Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is great
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:

Also, welcome to dA--I hope you like it here.
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, honey! :heart:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
You're welcome.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student Writer
Wonderful!
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student Writer
:heart::heart:
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love how this all sews together
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you!
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I got caught by the title, instantly :D I definitely prefer the second stanza to the first - it took me a while to get my head around the first one, probably because I'm not really awake yet!
Nicely done :rose:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The first stanza is definitely a bit more abstract than the second, I understand that. :heart: Thank you for reading, and for the feedback! 
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fernknits Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree that the second stanza is more straightforward.  On a second pass-through, though, the first packs a good punch! I like!
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartglompplz:
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fernknits Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Also, the title is mesmerizing.
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for including one of my titles on this!  This is truly lovely!! :tighthug:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so welcome--I'm glad you like it! :heart:
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