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Take a look in the mirror;
tell me, what do you see?
I see a mess of a soul
trapped in a masterpiece.

Peel the layers back
and glance beneath skin.
Hiding under the glitter
is a monster within.

Take a look in the mirror;
do you see what I crave?
Your hatred makes up
for all the love that you gave.

Peel the layers back
and lose what's left of your heart.
I'll never let go
until your world's torn apart.

Take a look in the mirror
and see what I see:
a soul lost to tomorrow,
forever belonging to me.
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~Arobis Feb 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
this is good
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~fleurdelocean Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
this is incredible, it describes a situation with a friend, and with myself to a T. truely amazing.
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:icongoodsirdavid:
The last line of the third stanza is a little bit awkward - you might consider revising it. Otherwise, nicely done!
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:icontwilightpoetess:
Thanks. I'll look it over and see what I can do.
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~akatsukixwannaxbe Dec 10, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
:heart: This is really amazing hun ^.^ amazing work yeah
I like the meaning it has
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:iconsomebodyornobody:
This must be one of the best things you've ever written.. *in chok*
<3
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