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7:25 A.M.

MONDAY, JULY 25TH

    PASSWORD: |
        *******

LOGIN SUCCESSFUL. WELCOME BACK, DUMA.

    CONTINUE STAR SWEEP?
        YES/NO|
        YES

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NEW STAR CHARTED.

    NAME NEW STAR?
        YES/NO |
        YES

NAME: BLURBURRY

    ACCEPT NAME: BLURBURRY?
        YES/NO |
        YES

STAR NAME ACCEPTED. CONGRATULATIONS.

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UNKNOWN (7:55 AM): 07ga;hadgn;a132
UNKNOWN (7:59 AM): a;jgadn;47a;gdanns
UNKNOWN (8:08 AM): he00853llo
DUMA (8:25 AM): Who is this?
UNKNOWN (8:34 AM): hello, lady
DUMA (8:36 AM): No, really--who is this?
UNKNOWN (8:40 AM): i come in peace?
DUMA (8:43 AM): OMG seriously? Dr. Cortal told you guys to leave me alone.
UNKNOWN (8:48 AM): let me take you to my leader?
DUMA (8:57 AM): Get lost, jerk.
    MESSAGES DELETED; NUMBER BLOCKED

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9:30 PM
TUESDAY, JULY 26TH

    PASSWORD: |
        *******

    PHONE NUMBER: |

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DUMA (9:35 PM): Hey, Stace--has the program ever asked for a phone number from you before?
STACELLA (9:45 PM): Uhm... No?
DUMA (9:47 PM): Huh. That's...weird.
STACELLA (9:50 PM): But I'm on vacay. Maybe it's a new thing? Security or something?
DUMA (9:52 PM): Yeah. Maybe.

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10:00 PM
TUESDAY, JULY 26TH

    PASSWORD: |
        *******

   PHONE NUMBER: |
        (568) 982-0010

LOGIN SUCCESSFUL. WELCOME BACK, DUMA.

    CONTINUE STAR SWEEP?
        YES/NO |
        YES

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UNKNOWN (11:29 PM): Duma.
DUMA (11:15 PM): Hi. Who is this?
UNKNOWN (11:17 PM): A friend.
DUMA (11:18 PM): Okay... What's your name?
UNKNOWN (11:21 PM): Zorb.
UNKNOWN (11:34 PM): Can I ask you something?
DUMA (11:43 PM): Uhm. Sure. What's up?
UNKNOWN (11:48 PM): Why did you pick Blurburry?
DUMA (11:53 PM): ....
DUMA (11:57 PM): How do you even...
DUMA (12:10 AM): Stop texting me, jackass.
    MESSAGES DELETED; NUMBER BLOCKED

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3:15 AM
THURSDAY, JULY 28TH

    PASSWORD: |
        *******

    PHONE NUMBER: |
        (568) 982-0010

LOGIN SUCCESSFUL. WELCOME BACK, DUMA.

    RENAME STAR: BLURBURRY?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    ARE YOU CERTAIN?
        YES/NO |
        YES

    CONTINUE STAR SWEEP?
        YES/NO |
        YES

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UNKNOWN (12:01 AM): Duma.
DUMA (12:05 AM): Yes...?
UNKNOWN (12:08 AM): You looked pretty tonight. Red is a great color on you.
DUMA (12:15 AM): Uhm. Thank you.
UNKNOWN (12:22 AM): How... Erm. How are you?
DUMA (12:24 AM): I'm okay. How are you?
UNKNOWN (12:27 AM): I am... I'm... Nervous.
DUMA (12:30 AM): About what?
UNKNOWN (12:39 AM): Talking to you...

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DUMA (2:45 AM): Stace.
STACELLA (3:17 AM): What do you want?! I'm trying to sleep--something you should do more of!
DUMA (3:18 AM): You didn't give my number out to another boy, did you?
STACELLA (3:22 AM): No! I learned my lesson last time.
DUMA (3:25 AM): Ok... Good night.

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DUMA (4:35 AM): Why would you be nervous?
DUMA (4:37 AM): I'm nothing special.
DUMA (4:40 AM): Just some girl with too much time one her hands and her head in the clouds.
UNKNOWN (4:55 AM): You're more than just some girl.

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UNKNOWN (6:18 PM): Do you ever wonder what else is out there?
DUMA (6:20 PM): Out there? Where?
UNKNOWN (6:23 PM): You know. Past your stars. Past your solar system.
DUMA (6:26 PM): Sure, I think about it.
DUMA (6:28 PM): I wonder if there are other livable planets.
DUMA (6:31 PM): Other intelligent life-forms.
DUMA (6:35 PM): But then I think, it doesn't really matter, because I won't ever know.
UNKNOWN (6:39 PM): Why not?
DUMA (6:41 PM): Well... How could I?
UNKNOWN (6:45 PM): I guess you're right. But what if?
DUMA (6:47 PM): What if, what?
UNKNOWN (6:52 PM): What if you COULD know?
UNKNOWN (6:54 PM): What if someone, somewhere, found a way to contact you?
UNKNOWN (6:56 PM): Learned your language. Your technologies. Your name.
UNKNOWN (6:59 PM): Figured out how to scam a computer into sending messages across space.
UNKNOWN (7:05 PM): Said hello... 
DUMA (7:10 PM): I don't know. I guess...
DUMA (7:14 PM): I guess I'd say hello right back. 

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4:37 AM
SATURDAY, JULY 30TH

     PASSWORD: |
        *******

    PHONE NUMBER: |
        (568) 982-0010

    BIRTHDAY: |
        AUGUST 5TH

LOGIN SUCCESSFUL. WELCOME BACK, DUMA.

    RENAME STAR: BLURBURRY?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    ARE YOU CERTAIN?
        YES/NO |
        YES

    CONTINUE STAR SWEEP?
        YES/NO |
        YES

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DUMA (5:56 AM): The computer asked another weird question...
STACELLA (9:45 AM): Oh? Like what, take me to your leader?
DUMA (10:00 AM): No... It asked for my birthday.
STACELLA (10:01 AM): So? What's the problem?
DUMA (10:02 AM): Don't you think that's a little... weird?
STACELLA (10:05 AM): Duma, YOU'RE a little weird.
DUMA (10:06 AM): But...
STACELLA (10:07 AM): But nothing! It's not that big a deal!
DUMA (10:08 AM): You think so?
STACELLA (10:10 AM): I think you've been staring at a computer screen too much. Get out of the observatory for a while, kay?
DUMA (10:13 AM): Ok...
STACELLA (10:21 AM): Whatever happened to your secret admirer? Maybe you should call him.

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DUMA (1:03 PM): Hey. What are you doing today?
UNKNOWN (1:05 PM): Hey, beautiful. Not a lot--just thinking about you and imagining the way your smile dimples your cheeks. What about you?
DUMA (1:06 PM): How would you know? Have we met?
UNKNOWN (1:08 PM): Uhm. No.
UNKNOWN (1:08 PM): That's why it's called fantasizing.
UNKNOWN (1:08 PM): You never answered me.
DUMA (1:09 PM): Oh. Not much.
DUMA (1:11 PM): Thinking about getting out of the lab for a while.
UNKNOWN (1:14 PM): Oh? Why--tired of looking at stars?
DUMA (1:17 PM): LOL no.
DUMA (1:20 PM): I don't think I'll ever get tired of that.
DUMA (1:23 PM): Just... Feeling a little cooped up.
UNKNOWN (1:25 PM): Well, you should get out. It's not good to stare at a computer so long.
DUMA (1:28 PM): Ok.
DUMA (1: 30 PM): Want to keep me company?
DUMA (1:36 PM): We could watch a movie...
UNKNOWN (1:39 PM): What is... What sort of movie?
DUMA (1:45 PM): I dunno.
DUMA (1:47 PM): Armageddon?
DUMA (1:52 PM): I just got the new Star Trek movie...
UNKNOWN (1:56 PM): That would be... Uh... awesome? Yeah--awesome!
UNKNOWN (1:56 PM): But I'm...
UNKNOWN (1:57 PM): Uhm...
UNKNOWN (1:59 PM): I'm sort of out of town right now.
DUMA (2:04 PM): Oh. Ok. No worries, then.
UNKNOWN (2:17 PM): But... I could still talk to you here, if you'd like...

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UNKNOWN (4:24 PM): What do you like?
DUMA (4:26 PM): What do you mean?
UNKNOWN (4:30 PM): I mean... To do? What entertains you?
DUMA (4:32 PM): Oh. Uhm. Space. The stars. Reading. The Big Bang Theory.
UNKNOWN (4:35 PM): What--like when the universe was created?
DUMA (4:38 PM): LOL no. It's a TV show.
DUMA (4:44 PM): What about you? What do you like?
UNKNOWN (4:46 PM): Oh, you know. Space. The stars. Reading.
UNKNOWN (4:48 PM): You...
UNKNOWN (4:56 PM): What do you like about space?
DUMA (5:05 PM): Uhm. I dunno. I guess...the mystery? Like... every time we figure something out, something ELSE pops up and confuses us. And, you know, space is constantly changing.
UNKNOWN (5:09 PM): So... You like mysterious things?
DUMA (5:18 PM): Yeah.
DUMA (5:19 PM): I mean, I guess.
DUMA (5:25 PM): I mean...
UNKNOWN (5:40 PM): But space is also brooding.
UNKNOWN (5:45 PM): Dangerous...
DUMA (5:55 PM): What?
DUMA (6:00 PM): How?
DUMA (6:22 PM): Hello?

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11:39 AM
MONDAY, AUGUST 1ST

    PASSWORD: |
        *******

    PHONE NUMBER: |
        (568) 982-0010

    BIRTHDAY: |
        AUGUST 5TH

    ADDRESS: |
        610 WEST 1ST ST

    BLOOD TYPE: |
        O NEGATIVE

    BLOOD/ORGAN DONOR?
        YES/NO |
        YES

LOGIN SUCCESSFUL. WELCOME BACK, DUMA.

    CONTINUE STAR SWEEP?
        YES/NO |
        YES

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STACELLA (12:17 PM): Hey.
DUMA (12:23 PM): Hi...
STACELLA (12:32 PM): I heard you ran out of the observatory yesterday and haven't gone back.
STACELLA (12:35 PM): Everything okay?
STACELLA (12:55 PM): Duma?

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DUMA (2:34 PM): No.
DUMA (2:37 PM): No, everything's not ok.
DUMA (2:45 PM): I think...
DUMA (2:58 PM): I think the computer is stalking me.

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UNKNOWN (6:18 PM): I saw you earlier.
UNKNOWN (6:23 PM): Your hair looks SO pretty falling down your back, like a waterfall.
UNKNOWN (6:27 PM): I wanted to call out to you...
UNKNOWN (6:33 PM): But you were too far to hear me.

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DUMA (7:15 PM): You saw me? 
DUMA (7:17 PM): What do you mean, you saw me?
DUMA (7:19 PM): I thought you were out of town...?

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UNKNOWN (7:56 PM): I mean...
UNKNOWN (7:58 PM): I saw a picture of you. 
UNKNOWN (8:05 PM): You know--the one on the bridge?
UNKNOWN (8:09 PM): You looked so beautiful.

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DUMA (8:43 PM): When are you going to tell me your name?
DUMA (8:50 PM): I want to know.
DUMA (8:56 PM): Please?

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UNKNOWN (11:32 PM): Oz.
UNKNOWN (11:38 PM): My name is Oz Orbollac.
UNKNOWN (12:15 AM): And I think I...
UNKNOWN (12:17 AM): I think I'd like to meet you.
UNKNOWN (12:19 AM): I think I like you...

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DUMA (2:17 AM): Is it possible...
DUMA (2:19 AM): To like someone you've never met?
DUMA (2:26 AM): I know that sounds crazy...
DUMA (2:45 AM): It IS crazy.
DUMA (2:57 AM): I need to go back to the lab. I can't handle the real world.
STACELLA (6:45 AM): Are you talking about Mr. Mystery?
STACELLA (7:15 AM): I WANT DETAILS! CALL ME!

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UNKNOWN (4:45 PM): If I asked you to dance with me at midnight, would you?
UNKNOWN (4:50 PM): Duma?
UNKNOWN (4:55 PM): ...
DUMA (5:00 PM): Yes.
DUMA (5:01 PM): Yes, I would.
DUMA (5:03 PM): What would we dance to?
UNKNOWN (5:06 PM): I don't know.
UNKNOWN (5:08 PM): What's your favorite song?
DUMA (5:11 PM): I like instrumentals. What about you?
UNKNOWN (5:19 PM): I think I'd like anything you do.

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UNKNOWN (8:27 PM): Favorite movie?
DUMA (8:30 PM): Wall-E
UNKNOWN (8:35 PM): Favorite flower?
DUMA (8:44 PM): Lilies
UNKNOWN (8:46 PM): Favorite Star Trek shirt color?
DUMA (8:49 PM): That's an easy one--red!
UNKNOWN (8:51 PM): But...
UNKNOWN (8:55 PM): Don't they always get killed off?
DUMA (8:59 PM): Yeah. 
DUMA (9:03 PM): That's what makes it fun!
UNKNOWN (9:07 PM): I'm confused.
UNKNOWN (9:10 PM): How is death fun?
DUMA (9:15 PM): Well, death isn't.
DUMA (9:25 PM): But the drama of the death? 
DUMA (9:26 PM): THAT's what's fun.

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DUMA (7:19 AM): If you could go anywhere in the world, where would you go, what would you do, and who would you see?
UNKNOWN (7:27 AM): Uhm...
UNKNOWN (7:30 AM): That's a hard question!
UNKNOWN (7:43 AM): Let me get back to you.

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11:39 AM
WEDNESDAY, AUGUST 3RD

    PASSWORD: |
        *******

    PHONE NUMBER: |
        (568) 982-0010

    BIRTHDAY: |
        AUGUST 5TH

    ADDRESS: |
        610 WEST 1ST ST

    BLOOD TYPE: |
        O NEGATIVE

    BLOOD/ORGAN DONOR?
        YES/NO |
        YES

    DID YOU MISS ME
        YES/NO |
        YES

LOGIN SUCCESSFUL. WELCOME BACK, DUMA.

    CONTINUE STAR SWEEP?
        YES/NO |
        YES

-----

ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE HAS APPEARED NEAR BLURBURRY.

    NAME BLACKHOLE?
        YES/NO |
        YES

NAME: ZORB

    ACCEPT NAME: ZORB?
        YES/NO |
        YES

    ARE YOU SURE THAT'S THE RIGHT NAME?
        YES/NO |
        YES

BLACKHOLE HAS BEEN NAMED.

    INFORM SPACE SHUTTLE OF BLACKHOLE?
        YES/NO |

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DUMA (11:45 AM): There's a blackhole near the star I discovered.
DUMA (11:46 AM): Do I tell the shuttle about it?
DUMA (11:48 AM): What do you think?
STACELLA (11:50 AM): Naw.
STACELLA (11:52 AM): It's not like there's life on the star or anything.
STACELLA (11:55 AM): Just leave it be.
DUMA (11:57 AM): Ok.

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    INFORM SPACE SHUTTLE OF BLACKHOLE?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    LAUNCH RESCUE MISSION TO BLURBURRY?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    ARE YOU CERTAIN?
        YES/NO
        YES

    LAST CHANCE...
        YES/NO
        NO

            ........

    KEEP YOU UPDATED ON CHANGES?
        YES/NO |
        YES

OKAY.

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UNKNOWN (1:43 PM): What...
UNKNOWN (1:45 PM): What did you do?!
UNKNOWN (1:47 PM): Why would you DO this, Duma?!
UNKNOWN (1:50 PM): I trusted you.
UNKNOWN (1:55 PM): I LOVED you...

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DUMA (12:04 AM): Oz?
DUMA (12:07 AM): Oz, talk to me.
DUMA (12:09 AM): What did I do?
DUMA (12:15 AM): I can't change it if I don't know...
DUMA (12:19 AM): Hello?

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UNKNOWN (12:43 AM): If I could go anywhere, I'd go where you are.

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ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE ZORB IS APPROACHING STAR BLURBURRY.

    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |
        NO

            ........

THAT ANSWER IS NOT ACCEPTABLE.

    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |
        NO

            .........

AGAIN, THAT ANSWER IS NOT ACCEPTABLE.

    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |

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DUMA (6:15 PM): The computer is giving me orders...
STACELLA (6:17 PM): Uhm. Computers don't give orders, Duma.
DUMA (6:18 PM): It keeps telling me my answer is unnacceptable...
STACELLA (6:19 PM): What are you talking about?
DUMA (6:21 PM): Whether or not to alert the space shuttle for a rescue mission to Blurburry.
DUMA (6:23 PM): It keeps telling me "NO" isn't acceptable.
STACELLA (6:25 PM): Maybe it's a glitch?
STACELLA (6:26 PM): What happens if you click yes?
DUMA (6:28 PM): The rescue team gets launched.
STACELLA (6:30 PM): Do it.
STACELLA (6:31 PM): At least then, the computer will shut up about it.

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    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |
        NO

    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION TO STAR BLURBURRY, TO COLLECT OZ ORBOLLAC?
        YES/NO |

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DUMA (6:40 PM): Oz? Where are you...?
UNKNOWN (6:41 PM): Uhm... Out of town...
DUMA (6:42 PM): WHERE out of town?
UNKNOWN (6:43 PM): I think you already know the answer to that...
DUMA (6:44 PM): NO!
DUMA (6:49 PM): You have GOT to be kidding me...
UNKNOWN (6:49 PM): I think...
UNKNOWN (6:55 PM): I think I love you, Duma.

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    ALERT SPACE SHUTTLE FOR RESCUE MISSION?
        YES/NO |
        YES

SPACE SHUTTLE HAS BEEN ALERTED. RESCUE MISSION UNDERWAY.

ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE ZORB WILL DESTROY STAR BLURBURRY IN 4 HOURS, 5 MINUTES.

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DUMA (7:54 PM): Oz? The rescue team is on the way...
DUMA (7:54 PM): You messed with the computer, didn't you? YOU asked me all those weird questions...
UNKNOWN (7:54 PM): Yes.
DUMA (7:55 PM): Why?
UNKNOWN (7:55 PM): I didn't want to scare you away...
DUMA (7:56 PM): I'm not afraid of you.

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ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE ZORB WILL DESTROY STAR BLURBURRY IN 3 HOURS, 4 MINUTES.

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UNKNOWN (8:56 PM): Duma...
UNKNOWN (8:56 PM): Can I ask you something?
DUMA (8:57 PM): Sure. Anything.

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ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE ZORB WILL DESTROY STAR BLURBURRY IN 2 HOURS, 3 MINUTES.

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UNKNOWN (9:57 PM): If you're not afraid...
UNKNOWN (9:58 PM): Why did you block me so many times?
DUMA (9:58 PM): You're Zorb, aren't you?
UNKNOWN (10:00 PM): Yes. I'm Zorb.

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ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE ZORB WILL DESTROY STAR BLURBURRY IN 1 HOURS, 2 MINUTES.

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DUMA (10:58 PM): I thought you were someone else.
DUMA (10:58 PM): I thought--
DUMA (10:58 PM): I'm sorry.
DUMA (11:16 PM): I take it back...
DUMA (11:20 PM): What I said about death? I take it back.
UNKNOWN (11:22 PM): I know you do.

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ATTENTION: BLACKHOLE ZORB WILL DESTROY STAR BLURBURRY IN 1 MINUTES.

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DUMA (11:59 PM): Oz? Are you still there?
DUMA (11:59 PM): Please say something?
DUMA (11:59 PM): Don't leave me!
DUMA (12:00 AM): We haven't gotten our dance yet. You CAN'T leave me!
DUMA (12:00 AM): Oz.......

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ATTENTION--BLURBURRY DESTROYED.

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UNKNOWN (12:01 AM): Duma.
UNKNOWN (12:01 AM): Happy birthday.
UNKNOWN (12:02 AM): I think you owe me a dance.

***EDIT--A DLD?! Thank you, ~doodlerTM!***

THIS TOOK ME FOREVER!

This is my entry for :iconpoetryvstheworld:'s September Tourney: Blue Round

The theme: Midnight Dance

I wanted to stick with my "original" takes on the prompt.

I also wrote this for :iconlacoterie:'s September Prose Prompt:
Write a story through text messages. Who are the people texting, and what are they talking about? Try to make it interesting. Maybe someone’s delivering exciting news, or someone’s professing their love and the other person is insulted they did it over text.
I only SORT OF cheated. Some of this is computer-speak, after all. >.>

Recent Critique: here.

September 12th, 2013
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Once I started it, I had to finish it.  I didn't realize it was as long as it is, but it drew me in and WOW!