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Some days,
the past
weighs nothing--
snowflakes
floating
in a tiny glass globe
waiting
to be carried away
on the wind.

Other days,
the past
breathes with the sea--
kelp
tangling about my ankles
beneath
turbulent waves.
:iconglory-be-project: Day don't let these things haunt you, okay?

November 5th, 2013
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I feel this.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: I'm sorry you can relate (though I think we ALL have those days, yes?)
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely. :heart:
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Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When it feels like you're drowning, just don't forget to breathe.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: That's an excellent tip. Lol. Thank you for reading!
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Remember, a cry for kelp does not go unnoticed. . .

A weak pun, but it is early. :shrug:

I have faved these past couple poems because of their strength in the message- not that they are weak in other aspects, just that I feel the message stands out more.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: Thank you, hon.
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:iconeremitik:
Eremitik Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
You are most welcome.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Professional Writer
You're great work is featured in the "greyshadow's" fav.me/d6tfq3n :rose:
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you, Frantz!
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SherrySilver Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student General Artist
This is nice I like it ^^
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconbark:
Bark Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Professional Writer
I know exactly what you're talking about here. Beautifully said.
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you for reading, hon!
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AzraeloftheRoses Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:(
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:iconrlkirkland:
rlkirkland Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yep, life! :)
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed! :heart:
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Those descriptions are just incredibly apt. Particularly enjoyed the second stanza, with the use of the dash :rose:
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, sweetheart! :iconheartglompplz:
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sending love to one of the most positive, beautiful influences I know. Keep your head held high darling, you are loved. :heart:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartglompplz: Thank you, sweetheart. 
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:iconladylincoln:
LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, dearheart. :hug:
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:iconmotleydreams:
MotleyDreams Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't let it drag you down. :hug:
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I try not to. :iconheartglompplz:
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