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Some days,
the past
weighs nothing--
snowflakes
floating
in a tiny glass globe
waiting
to be carried away
on the wind.

Other days,
the past
breathes with the sea--
kelp
tangling about my ankles
beneath
turbulent waves.
:iconglory-be-project: Day don't let these things haunt you, okay?

November 5th, 2013
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I feel this.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: I'm sorry you can relate (though I think we ALL have those days, yes?)
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely. :heart:
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:iconmorpheus1035:
Morpheus1035 Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When it feels like you're drowning, just don't forget to breathe.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: That's an excellent tip. Lol. Thank you for reading!
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:iconeremitik:
Remember, a cry for kelp does not go unnoticed. . .

A weak pun, but it is early. :shrug:

I have faved these past couple poems because of their strength in the message- not that they are weak in other aspects, just that I feel the message stands out more.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: Thank you, hon.
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:iconeremitik:
You are most welcome.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Nov 7, 2013  Professional Writer
You're great work is featured in the "greyshadow's" fav.me/d6tfq3n :rose:
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you, Frantz!
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