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yesterday...

you snapped me a smile,
promised me roses and love.
blew kisses goodbye.

with trembling hands,
i tucked in your folds slowly,
a sighing blossom.

swallowing my fear,
i uncovered your secrets
and left you behind.


today...

i miss your smooth skin,
the dimple on your right cheek.
the ways that you move.

i lost you to time
and a flame, hungry red.
your edges were burned.

someday, i'll find love
in the bed of some girl. for
now, your sheets will do.


tomorrow...

i'll see you in dreams
and wake with tears in my eyes,
but i'm letting go.

your lips, glossy smooth,
will tease my memories, but
your petals are gone.

that day, with my heart,
you posed like a school-girl, and
you snapped me a smile.

(and i haven't forgotten you since.)
Hahah. More Haiku. I had more fun with this one...there are a few mini-hints about what this person is referring to, can you figure it out?

5-7-5 syllable structure, except the last line, which has nine.

January 2010

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coprolism Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
im not that good at hyphenating in english so im not sure if every verse has 5-7-5 structure.
doesn't matter though. it makes a great poem and i like the idea of three-pronged time
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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chelseawood Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
i loved this, it was great...
:+fav:, it was beautiful and wonderfully writen xx
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
aww...thanks hon. ^.^
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chelseawood Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
:) welcome xx
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Pickled-Poppy Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010  Student Writer
Ahhh golly! This is stunning <3
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chocolateraisins Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
It made me Dwaaaaaaa :meow:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
haha. that's a good thing, right? ^.^
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chocolateraisins Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
Denfinantly :D
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