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my frogman.

    you have bug-eyes, webbed-toes, and a suction-cup grasp on my hand, and i'm hoping your skin never sweats.  you eat chocolate grasshoppers like candy and sometimes ribbit in your sleep.  when i wake you, you tell me you were dreaming of mudpies and a melody created at dusk.  sometimes, i wonder if you're more frog than man, but you aren't turning green yet. you waste time hopping from foot to foot, promises croaked from your throat.  your irisies are dark, almost black, and much too small for the white space surrounding them.  and sometimes, when i wake, i find you huddled at the window letting raindrops soak your stringy hair.   but baby, i don't care that your tongue is too long and your feet stick to the floor when you're barefoot.  at night, you wrap me up in your arms and whisper, gently, your cadences of 'i'llloveyouforever's and 'i'mneverlettingyougo's.   and who cares if you sometimes dream in black-and-white or grumble about flies between snores?  it's the quirks that make you wonderful.  it's the frog in you i love.


me.
Frogmen are wonderful!

I told :iconhalfangelrisesagain: that I would write something happy lovey for him. Here it be!

The themes are Bug (written) and Eyes (drawn)

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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010   Writer
Aww, it's so cute, quirky and sweet in it's own way. I like it! :giggle:



Thanks so much for sharing this piece with our group, #dALinkSystem! ♥
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! And you are welcome. ^.^
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010   Writer
You're welcome dear! :hug: <3
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SeraAmadis Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
This is awesome :) It's so odd and kind of adorable...
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DizzyTestament Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
Funny and Quirky and in a strange way reminds me of the guy I love. Not that he's a frogman, mind you. More like a wolfman. But quirks are quirks and we can't help loving the people we do, no matter how odd they can be to the rest of the world.
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Interpunct Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
I love this so much. It's cute, and quirky, and filled with some clean, tight writing. I especially liked the "when i wake you, you tell me you were dreaming of mudpies and a melody created at dusk". The series of m's sounds wonderful!
Frogmen are the best, and this piece proves it. :D
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
aww, thanks so much!
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TheFulkrum Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
just cute! :)
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! lol. I had fun with this one.
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TheFulkrum Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
lol
can tell :)
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